Showing posts with label Invisible Woman. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Invisible Woman. Show all posts
Saturday, September 13, 2014
Invisible Woman - Villain's POV - Arby Moay
Panel 1
We are in the POV of some random villain whose identity is not really all that important. We see a street in New York that has been completely devastated. Rubble everywhere, and some burning buildings. The Fantastic Four are lying unconscious in the middle of the street. Mr. Fantastic looks like he's been flatened. Johnny does not have his flame on. Ben's left leg has collapsed and become rubble. Sue is lying on her stomach.
CAPTION: If you are a villain, then there's a chance that you might've been lucky enough to see something like this.
CAPTION: You've given it you're all, and you've finally defeated the superheroes.Victory is at hand.
Panel 2
Same. The villain POV walks closer to the Fantastic Four. Sue is now starting to get back up.
CAPTION: Unfortunately for you, it's not the end of the story.
CAPTION: You see one of your enemies get back up time and time again.
CAPTION: And you realize...
Panel 3
Same. Sue raises up her left hand towards us, and engulfs our head in a force field.
CAPTION: ...that while you were busy trying to conquer the world to impose your own ideals upon it...
CAPTION: ...she was busy trying to defend the world. But beyond that, she had people, loved ones, that she had to protect, willing her to live on. To always get back up.
Panel 4
Panel's all in black.
CAPTION: So you see all along...
CAPTION: ...you picked the wrong fight.
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Arby Moay
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5:00 PM
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Invisible Woman - The Madding Crowd: some answers - R.A. Wonsowski
Panel 1- SUSAN STORM is cheerfully waving hello to the reader.
SUSAN: Hi. I'm Susan Storm. Ray recently got promoted and is in training classes this week, so he asked me to fill in.
Panel 2- SUSAN is walking to the right of the page, past her wedding photo with REED and Warhol's Campbell soup can painting, both hanging on the wall.
SUSAN: Ray's been working on his story arc, and some people have been asking, "Where's all of this going?" "What's it all about?"
Panel 3- SUSAN points to a hanging portrait of Carl Jung.
SUSAN: Well, he's not about to give up his ending, but I can tell you where it began. With this man, Carl Jung.
Panel 4- SUSAN now gestures to a sepia-tone photograph of Sigmund Freud and Carl Jung, sitting on a university park bench. In the corner, a tiny DEADPOOL holds a placard that reads: "WARNING! Educational Content!"
SUSAN: While Sigmund Freud had advanced psychology a great deal with his theory of id, ego, and superego, they only accounted for conscious mental states. They didn't take into account the subconscious.
SUSAN: Freud believed much of our subconscious was down to suppressed physical urges. Jung, however, believed it was an amalgamation of repressed sexual identity.
Panel 5- SUSAN is standing between SHE-HULK (in her old FF uniform), who has a 1000 lb barbell lifted over her head with one hand, and the THING, who is wearing a summery flower print dress, grousing and holding the hem daintily between his rocky fingers.
SUSAN: The idea that a woman couldn't be feminine if she was strong or authoritative, or that a man wasn't a "man" if he was sensitive or passionate, was expressed through what Jung called the animus and the anima.
THING: ...wotta revoltin' development...
Panel 6- SUSAN stands in front of the cover of FF v1 #281
SUSAN: The animus, or subconscious masculinity, and the anima, or subconscious femininity, are, however, part of our "shadow aspect".
SUSAN: That's the part of our Self that, when expressed, leads to creativity and discovery. Or, if restricted, can lead us to our darkest impulses.
Panel 7- Head and shoulders shot of SUSAN, winking knowingly at us.
SUSAN: Just imagine what would happen if that "shadow aspect" was set free, made manifest in reality...
SUSAN: Keep that in mind when we see you next week. Bye for now!
Written by
American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)
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5:30 AM
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Friday, September 12, 2014
Invisible Woman – Indomitable – Travis M. Holyfield
Panel 1: Susan Richards, The Invisible Woman, stands facing Mentallo. Her fists are clenched, and her mouth is set in a determined grimace. Beads of sweat dot her forehead. Mentallo's helmet emits a (Kirby) crackle of energy.
MENTALLO: You're only hurting yourself, Mrs. Richards.
MENTALLO: A.I.M. has improved my psycho-helmet. It's boosting my powers to levels even Charles Xavier never reached.
Panel 2: Focus on Mentallo's face. His helmet continues to pulse with energy as he smiles a cocksure grin.
MENTALLO: Please just open your husband's lab for me, before your brain dissolves into taffy.
Panel 3: Continuation of previous panel. Mentallo's helmet continues to pulse, but he's no longer smiling. Sweat is starting to pour down his face, and he looks panicked.
MENTALLO: How.. how are you resisting? It's...
MENTALLO Your willpower... Never seen anything like...
Panel 4: Susan thrusts her hands towards Mentallo. A cylinder of invisible force extends from her hands to smash Mentallo against a wall.
SFX: THOOM!
MENTALLO: UUUUUNFFFFFF!
Panel 5: Sue takes a moment to collect herself. She leans against a wall, breathing deeply. Mentallo lies in a crumpled heap on the floor.
SUSAN RICHARDS: Willpower?
SUSAN RICHARDS: I've been married to Reed Richards for ten years and I haven't smothered him in his sleep with a pillow.
Panel 6: Susan steps over Mentallo's unconscious body, striding boldly towards her next challenge.
SUSAN RICHARDS: You have NO idea what willpower is.
Written by
Travis M. Holyfield
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11:23 PM
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Monday, September 8, 2014
Invisible Woman - Just Desserts - Grant McLaughlin
Three rows. Panel 1 is the top row, panels 2 and 3 are the middle row, and panels 4 and 5 are the bottom row.
1 - Reed Richards stands in a doorway, smiling candidly at Susan and Ben (off-panel within the room he's looking upon). He's been leaning on the doorframe, as if he wasn't planning on being there long.
REED (1): ...all that to say that I was somewhat taken aback by Henry's comparatively unconventional views on molecular cosmic metabiological chemistry.
REED (2): Thanks so much for listening! Usually you guys leave at the first opportunity when I get going on these topics.
2 - Susan Richards and Benjamin Grimm sit at an empty kitchen table, looking back at Reed (and the reader). They have big, fake smiles on their faces. As well, Sue looks a little distracted (maybe holding a hand to her temple or looking to the side distractedly).
SUSAN: N-no worries, hun!
BEN: Yeah... anytime, Stretch.
3 - Repeat panel, except Susan and Ben now wear looks of relief on their faces. They slump into their seats, exhausted from whatever scientific gobbledy-gook Reed has been going on about. On the table in front of them, a delicious looking cake (cheesecake?) starts appear (as Sue removes the invisibility shields she'd put up around it).
SUSAN: Oh, thank god. I thought he would never leave!
BEN: Was that really necessary?
4 - Sue takes a fork and starts in on the cake. She looks seriously in Ben's direction.
SUSAN: Are you kidding?
5 - Cake on the end of her fork, Sue (brow still a little furrowed) points it accusingly towards Ben, who holds his arms up in surrender / apology.
SUSAN: It's bad enough I have to share any of this with you!
1 - Reed Richards stands in a doorway, smiling candidly at Susan and Ben (off-panel within the room he's looking upon). He's been leaning on the doorframe, as if he wasn't planning on being there long.
REED (1): ...all that to say that I was somewhat taken aback by Henry's comparatively unconventional views on molecular cosmic metabiological chemistry.
REED (2): Thanks so much for listening! Usually you guys leave at the first opportunity when I get going on these topics.
2 - Susan Richards and Benjamin Grimm sit at an empty kitchen table, looking back at Reed (and the reader). They have big, fake smiles on their faces. As well, Sue looks a little distracted (maybe holding a hand to her temple or looking to the side distractedly).
SUSAN: N-no worries, hun!
BEN: Yeah... anytime, Stretch.
3 - Repeat panel, except Susan and Ben now wear looks of relief on their faces. They slump into their seats, exhausted from whatever scientific gobbledy-gook Reed has been going on about. On the table in front of them, a delicious looking cake (cheesecake?) starts appear (as Sue removes the invisibility shields she'd put up around it).
SUSAN: Oh, thank god. I thought he would never leave!
BEN: Was that really necessary?
4 - Sue takes a fork and starts in on the cake. She looks seriously in Ben's direction.
SUSAN: Are you kidding?
5 - Cake on the end of her fork, Sue (brow still a little furrowed) points it accusingly towards Ben, who holds his arms up in surrender / apology.
SUSAN: It's bad enough I have to share any of this with you!
Written by
Grant McLaughlin
at
11:00 PM
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Sunday, September 7, 2014
Invisible Woman – Just Another Day – MK Stangeland Jr.
(7 Panels)
Panel 1: Panels 1, 2, and 3 should all sit in the
same row.
SUSAN STORM RICHARDS –
the INVISIBLE WOMAN – is in the kitchen of the BAXTER BUILDING. She is facing
the panel, and looks like she’s recently gotten up on the wrong side of the
bed. In her hand is a cup of coffee.
Panel 2: SUSAN has the same position in the panel,
but is drinking from the mug in her hand.
SUSAN: Mmm…
Panel 3: SUSAN – in same position - is looking much
better as she holds the coffee in front of her.
SUSAN: Ah…
Panel 4: SUSAN – same position – is glancing over her
shoulder as she holds up JOHNNY STORM and THE THING in force field bubbles
behind her.
SUSAN: I’ll let you out when you promise to stop trying to
kill each other.
Panel 5: SUSAN – same position – has a knowing look
on her face. She’s in REED RICHARDS lab, which is currently on fire, and has
put force field bubbles around the flames to help put them out.
REED (1): That didn’t go at all how I calculated.
REED (2): There must be a variable I’m unaware of…
Panel 6: SUSAN – same position – is on top of the
BAXTER BUILDING rolling her eyes. DR. DOOM – probably just a DOOMBOT - is in
the air behind her. While he’s floating, he’d been knocked off-center by one of
SUSAN’s large force-field bubbles.
DR. DOOM: TREMBLE BEFORE THE MIGHT O-UUF!
SFX: Klonk!
Panel 7: SUSAN – same position – is sitting on a
couch. Behind her are FRANKLIN and VAL, while standing behind them is a monster
of which we can only see from the lower-legs down.
VAL (1): He followed us home. Can we keep him?
SUSAN (1): Is it an animal most people would recognize?
VAL (2): May-
SUSAN: (2) No.
(END PAGE)
Written by
MK Stangeland Jr.
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12:30 PM
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Why the Invisible Woman?
Let’s see…
Ben Grimm, The Thing? Check.
Reed “Mr. Fantastic” Richards? Check.
Johnny Storm, the Human Torch? Checkaroo.
Hmmm…that makes three of the Fantastic Four, which means
someone is still missing.
Somewhat appropriately enough, that means the only one we
haven’t seen yet is Susan
Storm/Richards, AKA the Invisible Woman. But she is certainly isn’t the least
of them by any means.
As has been previously stated, Thing is the everyman, Mr.
Fantastic is the brainy leader, and Human Torch is the guy that best represents
what everyone would like to be.
So what does that make Sue? Well, she’s the team’s adult. Someone has to be the responsible one.
With Ben brooding about being a rock monster, Reed getting lost in SCIENCE(!),
and Johnny busy living it up as a celebrity, that leaves Sue with the job of
being the most Fantastic member of the Foursome. Because it takes real strength
be the one person who keeps everyone in line, especially when she’s also got two
exceptional children she’s a mother to on top of it all.
It’s probably a good thing she’s such an exceptional hero,
because a villain in her shoes probably would have just killed them all years
ago out of maddening frustration. Especially since she’s got the power set to
make it happen.
Hero, Mother, Wife, Sister, Friend – and with patience like
hers, she’s practically a saint, too.
There's actually a picture here, but it's invisible.
Written by
MK Stangeland Jr.
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12:00 PM
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Friday, June 7, 2013
Johnny Storm - Slow Burn - Niel Jacoby
Panel 1: the Fantasticar is crashed in the arctic. THING, MR. FANTASTIC, and SUE STORM are unconscious. JOHNNY is worried. They are not nearly dressed for this weather.
Johnny: YOU CAN MAKE IT THROUGH, JOHNNY. JUST STAY CALM.
Johnny: YOU JUST NEED TO GET THEM TO SHELTER.
Panel 2: Johnny has set up a circle, with Thing, Mr. Fantastic, and Sue circled around him at a safe distance while he burns in the middle to warm them. We can see the faint forms of wolves on the horizon.
Johnny: JUST... JUST START CONCENTRATING, JOHNNY.
(link)
WE CAN ALL SURVIVE.
Johnny: YOU CAN MAKE IT THROUGH, JOHNNY. JUST STAY CALM.
Johnny: YOU JUST NEED TO GET THEM TO SHELTER.
Panel 2: Johnny has set up a circle, with Thing, Mr. Fantastic, and Sue circled around him at a safe distance while he burns in the middle to warm them. We can see the faint forms of wolves on the horizon.
Johnny: JUST... JUST START CONCENTRATING, JOHNNY.
(link)
WE CAN ALL SURVIVE.
Written by
Niel Jacoby
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6:00 PM
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